Chapter III: Blood and Humility

[lyn]

It is done. n__n

You like?

http://www.kurai.com/claris/j/blood.html

[Anomie]

EEEE!

NECAVI!

EEE!

No, really, I like it. It's very well written - your style keeps improving, and it's nifty to watch it evolve. I'd like a bit more explanation on the tears, though - how do they work? Are they spontaneously generated? And...um...will Bob show up? Oops, sorry, wrong universe. ^_^ Kudos.

[fadingroses]

MORE!  MORE!!!

please...  :-/

lol... found the site about two weeks ago, in the process of going through your assorted journals and stuff... yay, violation.  

I LOVE THE STORY!!!  KEEP GOING!!!  

-Alicia

[revolutionnaire]

Wow, I actually remembered that I'm supposed to be posting here on a regular basis.  Bad mod.  ::scolds self::

First of all, I will take the time to squeal like the pathetic fangirl I am, and rejoice over the fact that you've brought back Necavi.  Oh, how I love you, Lyn.  :3  You have brought me much happiness.

Squealing over, I have to say that this was a very, very interesting chapter.  (Hey, watch my amazing adjective use!  .__.)  I also agree with Anomie; your writing style has improved constantly throughout the story, and this one was absolutely amazing in that respect.

I'm getting the feeling that the necklace will be somewhat important later -- something that may or may not be wrong.  I'm not sure why; it could be because it's very mysterious-like, and it seems rather pointless to introduce it without elaborating.  (It could also be because it's 1:30 AM, and I am slowly losing all form of reason.)  I'm really curious to find out exactly what it is -- if anything -- and what it does.

Also, Tialiel is very cute.  ^__^

And *also*...Necavi.  <3  Hooray.

[Sunshine]

*is starry-eyed* Eeeee... more stooo-rriiiee... *topples*


Stunningly wonderful, as always. Thank-you. ^_^

[Ghost]

Waii! Finally finished up to Chapter III. Loved it!!   The fight scene with Cadmiel was neat, and i really enjoyed Shamshiel frolicking in the sun... for some reason  

I'm used to fics getting progressivly worse,  but this is the opposite. I must say, your writing has also improved a lot (but it was still good before, i swear!) *ducks airborn objects*

Can't wait to read Chapter IV