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Author Topic: Chapter 3: Revelation Part I  (Read 2930 times)
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hey baby :3

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« on: November 24, 2001, 03:32:13 PM »

Love it, hate it, received a seizure by reading it? o_o

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"All the world is queer save thee and me.  And even thou art a little queer."
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that monocle is dead sexy.

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« Reply #1 on: November 25, 2001, 07:32:24 AM »

Love it :D ::waves flags::  But the cliffhanger-ness is painful.  And my love for Fuu grows with every chapter.  And I didn't really like Charon that much before, but now I do.  And I fear whatever scary past he might have.  

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Stupid Angelfire, won't show my picture. :P


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« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2001, 10:49:53 AM »

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaa(Breathes)AAAAAAAAYYYY!  That pretty much sums up my opinion.  
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Let us think the unthinkable, let us do the undoable.  Let us prepare to grapple with the ineffable itself, and see if we may not eff it after all.
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Keeper of Dib's coat. yee! ^.6

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« Reply #3 on: November 25, 2001, 11:10:58 AM »

wahoo! *runs around in happy circles* yay! *glomps Fuu*
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« Reply #4 on: November 27, 2001, 07:23:12 PM »

Worth the wait ^_^!  As if I didn't already like Charon enough.  And that ending ::Wows:: I can't wait to read part two now ^_^!
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« Reply #5 on: December 17, 2001, 07:35:07 PM »

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Hey...just started reading your series today.....wow..Just read series2:Episode3-Part1    I HATE cliffhangerz!!! Angry But I must admit the suspense will keep me reading.   Both the story and your writing is great!   *whines*   I keep trying but I'm beginning to realize that writing might not be my element..  Embarrassed Ah well...I guess I'll keep working on it.  But as for this last part, I loved it. Cheesy    Fuu scares me though... Jada and Roan are my favorite I think because I see a little of myself in them.   ...that might be a bad thing... Oh well...getting late and Im procrastinating on my own story...
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