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Author Topic: Chapter VIII: Delirium and Memory  (Read 4406 times)
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« on: January 03, 2005, 07:22:00 PM »

http://www.kurai.com/claris/j/delirium.html

FIRST HALF.  SECOND HALF FORTHCOMING.

THOUGHTS?
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« Reply #1 on: January 08, 2005, 04:51:15 PM »

Looks like you might have to start promoting this thing...I know I'm surprised to see an update (I assumes the site was dead after over a year). Most of your fans aren't going to know you updated for quite a while, so e-mail some of the posting members.

Oh, and I liked it.
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« Reply #2 on: January 10, 2005, 12:16:17 PM »

Sorry it took a while but I went back and reread the last chapter.

In the section where they are about to enter the control the sentence, "When we reached the deck, we found an open door leading to the control room." is in italics, I got confused because at first I thought Meta was talking. 

But allover pretty good.

Also, what happened to the reminders?
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« Reply #3 on: January 10, 2005, 02:46:16 PM »

It's true, it's been a while XD

Reminders?  D'you mean a mailing list?  Maybe I should try to recreate one; I suppose I can't expect everyone to watch my LJ XD
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« Reply #4 on: January 11, 2005, 12:09:31 PM »

Yeah, a reminder would help. 

More thoughts:  Necavi killed Damien's goldfish?  How sad.

And I like Cadmiel's quote "It's not destiny, it's just annoying coincidence."  XD

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« Reply #5 on: January 16, 2005, 10:32:50 AM »

o.o;; wow, haven't been to the kurai board in a while...

^________^ awesome job on the first half!!! Can't wait for more!!!

Oooh my poor wittle Donovan ;_; *hugs*
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« Reply #6 on: February 01, 2005, 08:05:39 PM »

Great half of a chapter ^^
Just wondering, do you know where the plot is going with this story, or are you making it up as you go?
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« Reply #7 on: April 21, 2005, 05:57:30 PM »

Excellent. I can't wait for the next half.

The child-like Metatron reminds me of Daniel/Dream from the last book of the Sandman Series.
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« Reply #8 on: April 28, 2005, 11:32:44 PM »

I just caught up. I can't wait for the other half. I want to know what's up with Metatron and all of his...acting blindness and odd behavior. Huh He's my favorite character currently.
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« Reply #9 on: January 24, 2006, 12:01:43 AM »

Oh good lord! An update!
I am thrilled to pieces, let me tell you what. I've been checking every couple of months because I adore this story and can't bear to see it fizzle out. AND IT HASN'T. CAPS MEAN HAPPY.
So glad to see you're still alive and writing, and as thrilled with this (completed god yes) installment as I have been with the others.
Excepting that dreadful, awful, horrible april fools parody you did. Struck fear into my very core it did.
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