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Author Topic: Chapter IX: Revelation and Obscurity  (Read 3214 times)
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« on: January 27, 2006, 01:13:40 AM »

K, I know no one reads these forums or this story anymore, but JUST IN CASE

http://www.kurai.com/claris/j/obscurity.html

First 1500 words or so =p
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« Reply #1 on: January 29, 2006, 09:45:25 AM »

You love these cliff hangy things don't you? Almost as much as I love vicious, evil-minded owls I suspect.
And things will pick up, you will see!
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« Reply #2 on: January 29, 2006, 04:10:10 PM »

Its been a while, but people will return here :3

Ahhh cliffy :0!! I wonder if Leliel + Donovan got caught in it o_O. I have this feeling that she isnt strong enough to pull herself and Donovan out of it.



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« Reply #3 on: April 27, 2006, 06:47:05 PM »

Wow....I am a BIT late...but I wanted to leave my review, anyway Smiley It was UBER-short. I got to the end and I was like, 'Are you serious??' But I still enjoyed it. Even if you're not continuing (or even if you are in your own time) I have loved this story. The cliffhanger - ahhh! I wonder if Leliel - er, Lily and Donovan will be dragged in, or if they're still with them or what. I love Tialiel and Cadmiel, too (am I butchering their names?), they are too funny! Nice job Smiley

...but what about Frank??
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« Reply #4 on: May 22, 2006, 07:32:56 PM »

I read it *raises hand* and it is lovely! Although quite short. I adore your writing style though, I've enjoyed reading this story about as much as i enjoyed reading Queen of the damned (and that's my fav book). So i hope you're not gonna give up on it, i really wanna know what happens next.

 Oh and can i just say that i love Leliel and Donovan.   Grin
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« Reply #5 on: June 24, 2006, 01:43:49 PM »

Haha, I really appreciate your responses ... I'm surprised anyone even happens by this dead place anymore =p Anyway, if yall are checking back, the chapter is done now.  Just reload it and the remainder will magically appear~!
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« Reply #6 on: June 26, 2006, 11:12:23 PM »

Awww, Sean/Claris squish. I am so pleased <33333
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« Reply #7 on: July 01, 2006, 10:05:10 AM »

Lyn!!  I am also eiretamicha on LJ.  I still read!  I'm so happy you wrote another chapter...can't believe there's only three left, ahhhh!!

Anyway, wonderful, as usual.  And this:

“We found Orifiel hopping around like a frog stuffed full of caffeine,” Anael said.

almost made me spit milk all over my computer monitor, lmao.  Cheesy

I absolutley loved this chapter and can't wait for more! Smiley
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« Reply #8 on: July 06, 2006, 01:20:30 AM »

I thought of this story today, and was so happy to see that it's being updated again.  I can't wait for the next installment!  (Though is it odd that I'm really attached to Donovan now?  Wait, maybe I was before.  *can't remember*)
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« Reply #9 on: November 12, 2006, 09:29:02 PM »

O.o  OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! There's more story Shocked  I had all but given up.. check back every couple of months juuust incase.  I acctually have catching up to do now, reading time.. as always thanks for writing ^^
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