Wow....I am a BIT late...but I wanted to leave my review, anyway

It was UBER-short. I got to the end and I was like, 'Are you serious??' But I still enjoyed it. Even if you're not continuing (or even if you are in your own time) I have loved this story. The cliffhanger - ahhh! I wonder if Leliel - er, Lily and Donovan will be dragged in, or if they're still with them or what. I love Tialiel and Cadmiel, too (am I butchering their names?), they are too funny! Nice job
...but what about Frank??